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Brokenstar is Returning... And bringing the Clans to an End

Hey all peeps out there that love the Warriors series by Erin Hunter! ...Oh wait, I meant, Welcome! As you should know, unless you are blind, this site is a Warriors by Erin Hunter rpg. For all of the people who don't know about the series, it is about cat clans, and its a really great series! You'll learn their ways soon enough if you don't know them! If you need any help, you can ask any of the admins listed below, including mua, A.K.A:

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A terrifying prophesy is beginning to unfold. Will the clans be able to defend against what is coming?


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Plot


Plot

The clans have lived in their new lake home for about 2 seasons now. They are peacful and happy, with plenty of prey and warm days. They have long forgotten Brokenstar, Tigerstar, and every other cat that they had gone up against. But now, a prophesy has been sent from StarClan. A warning that these good days are soon to end. "Ancient Legacies will Bend, and the Broken Twig will Grow into a Tree" what can this mean? All signs point to a fearful future.

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Late New-Leaf. Getting warmer and prey is plentiful.

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Name:
Darkenedstar
Age:
41
Gender:
Tom
Physical Description:
Pelt
Darkenedstar's name partly comes from his coat. His pelt is a slick, glossy black. His fur is extremely short, thin, hard, and wirey. It is almost aways kept clean, but everyone has there lazy days. When not groomed his fur sticks up, and he will look like some savage rouge.
Body
This tom is a very large cat. He has broad shoulders and long legs. His strides are long, so he is fast. Muscle rips through his whole body. Darkenedstar's black tail is very long, and it drags the ground when he walks.
Markings
His front right paw is a extremly dark crimson color. It looks black in most light, but when the sun beats down on it jut right, it seems to glow and stands out. The same color can be found right below his left eye. There are five evenly spaced, perfectly shaped dots in a row, just below the eye.
Voids
The orbs themselves are strange. The base is a soft, light colored tan. Covering that crimson is spread over it. It looks as though something was murdered and the blood spilled in his eyes. His pupils aren't black, which is the strangest thing about him. They are a ashy gray.
Scars
Darkenedstar has many scars. The first would be on his left ear. there is a large nick in it. Then we move down to his neck. He has three claw marks on the right side of his flank, and a bite mark on his throat. He has a long scar on his left side that starts at his shoulder and runs down to his toes. He also has a scar running down his spine, one down his hind right leg, and he has a spot on his tail where no hair grows towards the end.

Personality:
Darkenedstar does not fit his clan. ThunderClan cats are nice, merecyful, gratful, and so on. He is not. Darkenedstar is a ShadowClan cat, and will always act like one. He resembles Tigerstar in a way, power hungry and cruel. But he doesn't care, ThunderClan is his to control. When coming to age, he is very wise. He knows things that most cats don't, a nice quality as a leader. He is a mean cat most of the time, but he does care for his Clan. He listens to his warriors, though most of the time never takes advice. He loves to hunt, and spends most of his time out of camp. He knows he should stay in, but he hates it. He would love to start a battle with a clan, but knows that it would not be wise. One thing that most people don't know about is that he loves kits. He acts like they annoy him, but truely, he loves them. He also doesn't have the strongest bond with StarClan. Alot of the time he will get angry with them, but they don't seem to mind. It is just his nature. Apprentices annoy him... They are just so hyper and bouncing, most of the time he just wants to flat out smack them! He doesn't want to train another, to him that would be torture, but if the time should come when there was no spare warriors are his deputy could not, he would do it, hateing every minute of it. There is also one more thing. Love. To him, it is something different. He doesn't know if he should believe in it or not. He has seen many cats sent into grate pain because of it. It makes you weak. Yet there is a part of him that wants to find it. Will he ever? StarClan only knows...

History:
Kitthood://
Origanly, Darkenedstar was born into Shadowclan by Frozenphenoix and Deathclaw. When he was birthed, he came into the world as a light gray kit. Within instants his light gray fur darkened to its now glossy black. His parents were surprise, and gave him the name Darkenedkit. As a kit, he had an older brother, Snakekit. They would fight alot and get into things they shouldn't. they often snuck out og camp, but was only caught once.

Appretniceship
At age of 6 moons he became Darkenedpaw. He was a happy cat that day. His mentor was Blackflame. He was a newly made warrior, and Darkenedpaw's idol. They trained hard everyday, both determined for Darkenedpaw to become a warrior. When he was 11 moons, foxes attacked the camp. Darkenedpaw fought along side his brother, Snakepaw, and protected the nursery, where their mother lay with a new born litter. Thier father was also beside them. A large fox suddenly came out of nowhere and attacked his father. Darkenedpaw tried to help, but there was no use, it had killed him. Next it went for Snakepaw. Once again, Darkenedpaw fought bravely to try and save his ingured brother, but there was no use... The fox just snapped its jaws around his throat and threw him aside, then killed his brother. Breathless, the black apprentice rose back to his feet to see the fox head for the nursery, he lunged forward, determined to save his mother. He clawed and bit at the foxes flank. And after a long time of fighting, he won. The fox ran off, and Darkenedpaw checked on his mother and younger brother and sisters. They were all safe. After the battle he was made a warrior. His name Darkenedsoul.

Warrior://
When he was a warrior, he lived a normal warrior life. He hunted and went on patrols. when he was 12 moons he got his first apprentice, Oakpaw. He tried the young cat well. Oakpaw quickly became Oakeyes. But every night of his warrior life, he had nightmares. Nightmares of his family dieing. he thought it was his fault. that he had never fought hard enough. After awhile he couldn't take it anymore, and left. He wandered over the border and into ThunderClan territory. They took him in. At first, none of them trusted him. Why blame them? He was a cat from an enemy clan. A few moons later, he was finally accepted. He got and trained an apprentice. Not that long after that, foxes attacked the camp. It was just like before, only this time, he fought harder. While fighting along side Silverclaw, he noticed a large fox with horrible scars around its neck. He remember. With a loud battle cry, he lept at the fox, and kill it in an instance. Suddenly, Grayrone, the ThunderClan deputy, let out a cry. Darkenedsoul ran forward, and helped the deputy, and saved her life. Sadly though, Burningstar, the Leader, passed away into during the battle. Grayrone became Graystar. She thought long and hard about her deputy... and chose Darkenedsoul for his courage and strength.

Deputy://
He never thought he would have been chosen. He was a cat from a rival clan, and now was ThunderClan deputy. Darkenedsoul took his potion with pride. He did his duty well. Some cats didn't like the choice, but they got over it and grew to love him as a clan mate. When he was 39 moons, Graystar died of Greencough

Leadership;//
He grieved for his lost leader, but knew what he had to do. He went to the Moonpool and went before StarClan. they granted him his name and nine lives. he arrived back to camp as Darkenedstar. Nothing bad has happened so far, and he is thankful. The only thing he has had to do, was name some apprentice and a warrior.
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